The Broken Page
Grammar and language awareness
What am I doing wrong?
The activity
Students receive a deliberately flawed passage and find the grammatical, structural, vocabulary, punctuation and clarity problems in it — before anyone teaches them the rule.
What it is for
Build linguistic consciousness. Students learn to recognise what is wrong, what is unclear, what is unnecessary, and why a correction is better.
They leave with
- Corrected Broken Page
- Quick-Reference Sheet
- Rewritten professional paragraph
Covered
- Tense, articles, prepositions, voice, subject–verb agreement
- Modifiers, punctuation, parallelism, redundancy
- Clarity, flow, transitions, tone